A look into the very rough draft pre-script of my novel in the works "Jadison"

Jadison


My book is about this guy by the name of Jadison who is a college student. He is a sophomore at Cal State Univ. Northridge and he loves it. He loves everything about college, from the campus atmosphere to the smell of the classrooms and the textbooks. But the biggest thing about college that he loves is that it’s such a philosophical world full of intellectuals on the corner of every street. Jadison is finally in a place where he belongs and has discovered happiness and friendship. He has so many good memories from kickbacks and parties that he spent with his friends already this school year, and with the year barely 2months underway, Jadison is excited for the year to continue to unfold. Jadison is a pretty smart guy; he knows what he wants out of life and knows what he has to do to get it, but unfortunately for him the school year starts off with too much fun and it proves too much for him to handle. But Jadison doesn’t care. He’s come to embrace the quote of Tom Petty, “You have four years to be irresponsible here. Relax. Work is for people with jobs. You'll never remember class time, but you'll remember the time you wasted hanging out with your friends. So, stay out late. Go out on a Tuesday with your friends when you have a paper due Wednesday. Spend money you don't have. Drink 'til sunrise. The work never ends, but college does...” Jadison has been using this quote since his beginning days as a college freshman and it’s never failed him yet.

A friend from high school comes to visit Jadison for two weeks from Japan just as the school year is kicking off. He caters to her every need and ends up establishing some feelings for her. But Jadison recently has been getting feelings for all his friends that are girls because he is longing for a relationship with someone. It has been nearly 2 years since his last relationship and he’s ready to find love. Mai-Rovei (friend from Japan) and Jadison party it up the whole time that she stays with him in the dorms and he introduces her to marijuana. They smoke a couple of days while she is there with him staying at the dorms. And one night they get caught by RA’s and the police. This is the start of Jadison drug career and one crazy ass night that pulls him into the world and far away from the person everyone knew and loved growing up. Jadison is your pretty average college student who does better than average with some extra hours of studying. He knows he’s not brilliant but still dreams of making the big bucks some day through fame. While Jadison is in his sophomore year he is faced with peer pressure and experiences with some different types of drugs…(ecstasy, pills, weed, liquid cocaine, and computer cleaner, ) during the time he is experiencing all these new things Jadison is also trying to work on himself as a man of integrity and dignity. He’s trying to be a good positive strong adult because he is soon to be 21 this next coming year and he wants to have everything on point so that he can become that superhuman type individual who has his priorities and life in order from front to back and back to front. Jadison feels the pressure from his physicist professor Ms. Akimi (shes Japanese and Jadison has a crush on her. He secretly fantasizes about fucking her relentlessly all over the classroom.) Jadison is going to fail her class if he doesn’t step his game up, but he has stepped his game up and he is still failing. He has never worked so hard and put so much effort into his schooling and studies before and still gained nothing. He is trying his hardest but it’s still not good enough. [All the while he is going back and forth from trying to do the right things to partying scenes and doing drugs and alcohol with some college friends at college parties. There are going to be some sub stories that build up the main story of Jadison outlined throughout the chapters.] The semester seems to be taking its time as the days pass and Jadison is hit with the reality that he is not going pass his physicist class. A class that is required for his major that is only offered once every 4 years. Jadison dream job revolves around this class. It’s his life. Something he has always wanted and gave his life purpose. He’s losing his mind and starts to hit the drugs and alcohol harder….one Friday night at the dorms alone Jadison decides to pick up a gram of marijuana from one of his buddies and a bottle of wine so he can enjoy his late weekend evening alone listening to the sounds of Kid Cudi. Sipping away at his chilled Sauvignon Blanc, crossing it with the effect of the sweet bud laced with THC, Jadison is pulled deep into thought and crosses into a whole other world located in the sole center of his mind. There he has an epiphany and comes to a resolve with his situation with class. He must kill Ms. Akimi and make sure that no one ever finds out or catches him in the act. He quickly devises a plan and goes through it in his mind for weeks. Finally he gains the will power to set his plan in motion. The following Monday he tells Ms. Akimi he needs to make an after hour appointment for a review on his past quiz due to some discrepancies. Luckily for him, Ms. Akimi was planning on staying late to finish up grading some papers that night and so she could squeeze him in right after she finished….. It was late, like around 10pm when Jadison met with Ms. Akimi. He walked into her office and was relieved to find no one there. In fact it seemed as though the whole Sierra Tower was empty by the quietness of the hallways. She closes the door and heads to the back toward another door. Jadison looks around observes his surroundings…empty, quiet, and gloomy. Seems the room had already been marked for death to pay it a little visit. Ms. Akimi tells Jadison to take a seat while she finishes up correcting papers. Jadison seats himself a few feet behind Ms. Akimi purposely to the left of her so that his shadow is concealed in the one casted down by the 9ft tall file cabinet lining the wall to the east side of the room. Jadison sits wondering when will be the right time to attack, and before he even realizes it he is already standing up walking toward her. He gets right up to her and goes to reach for her neck just as she turns around and looks at him startled. Her eyes confused and dazed, she is lost in the moment. It is too late now though, Jadison must complete his objective. He grabs her by the neck and covers her mouth to muffle the sounds of her screaming. He throws her against the wall and she goes limp. She isn’t dead though, just unconscious. He sits her up against the wall. She is beautiful; a beautiful disaster slain by the hands of an imbalanced 20yo. Jadison walks over to her and picks her body up off the floor. He feels his body waking up to the warm sensation of Ms. Akimi and his mind journeys back into his fantasies of him and making love to her. Jadison can’t control himself any longer at this moment. He lays Ms. Akimi on the table begins to kiss her, taking in the taste of her sweet lips. He takes in this moment of lust and lets it clothe him delicately as he unbuttons his jeans and slides down his pants. He parts Ms. Akimi's legs and fall deep into her penetrating her with his sword. She’s nice, real nice. Jadison goes harder, deeper, faster, and stronger. He grabs her breast and marvels them. His mouth waters and longs for the taste of her pink nipples. He heads up north driving his tongue from her belly button to the valley of her breast. He takes in each nipple like it’s a grape flavored jolly rancher. They react to the moisture and warmth of his mouth getting hard. And as her nipples get hard so does Jadison. He is at his peak and begins to blow out the contents of his mind through his sword. He releases, and turns her insides into winter wonderland. Fantasy fulfilled…. Time to get rid of the evidence… Jadison, wanting to avoid a bloody mess quickly dressed and put the room back to normal view. He walked back to the table where Ms. Akimi lay unconscious and raised her head into his arms and cradled it like a baby. One swift move, and 3 seconds later…Ms. Akemi is Dead... Jadison snaps her neck.

(This is the bases for my novel, Jadison. I am going to take an entire year to perfect it and mold it into the best story I possibly can. Hope you enjoyed the pre-script, stay tuned for the finished masterpiece; I am shooting to make it a couple of hundred pages long and very very juicy. So don’t worry that was just the introduction to my book: Jadison)

She Killed Me...

She was my everything. My night, my day, my light, my dark, my love, my happiness. She was my everything.


With her I was complete and whole.

She was the keeper of my heart who I entrusted with to hold, to love, to cherish…

Her smile was my ecstasy, her laughter was my healing, her presence was my protection, and her touch…Her touch was my life taking off on the road to our Happily Ever After Fairytale Ending.

Her words were sweet and warm.

And with her by my side I was someone unlike any other human that walked this earth. I was Spiderman and she was my Mary Jane.

And a prisoner of her love I was. My only wishes were to fall deeper into her love and be her one Knight in Shining Armor.

But Doubt…

Doubt was the Enemy.

My Victorious enemy at that. How he made his way into her heart, only God knows.

All I know is I lye here in a pool of my loves blood grasping for air; for life. For the day she doubted who I was and what I was to her in truth was the day my soul departed with no farewell. My heart left broken, shattered, and destroyed.

Why?... Because Life is a bitch, a beautiful bitch. That’s the conclusion I have come to acknowledge.

I question though this…For something so good, and true; so beautiful and pure, why was there such a cruel ending.

I turn from her forever now and seek comfort within myself. How could someone so beautiful turn heartless and take the life of her lover?